[U] grammar check in the name change in Finland, EN

content.en/posts/change-name-finland.md

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 author: "Anonymous"
 date: 2023-12-18
 linktitle: Name change in Finland
-tags: [
-    "Experience"]
-categories: [
-    "Finland",
-]
+tags: ["Experience"]
+categories: ["Finland"]
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 # A Brief Guide to Name Changes for Transgender Individuals in Finland
 
-**In this article, "you" is universally referred to as "ni." We apologize for any instances where this standard was not maintained.**
-
 Name changes already made outside of Finland can be updated for free. Please refer to [this website](https://dvv.fi/en/registration-of-a-name-change-performed-abroad).
 
 ## How to Submit an Application
 
-Note that if you wish to change your gender marker as well, refer to [Confirmation of gender - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/confirmation-of-gender). After changing your gender, you can change your name for free. Remember, you must reconfirm within **30 days to 6 months** after changing your gender.
+Note that if you wish to change your gender marker as well, refer to [Confirmation of gender - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/confirmation-of-gender). After changing your gender, you can change your name for free. Remember, you must reconfirm within **30 days to 6 months** after changing your gender marker.
 
 The process is as follows:
+
 - Strong identity verification (e.g., bank, MobileID) allows for the use of online services.
 - Download and fill out the form. Then either:
   - 1. Print and mail it to the specified address.
@@ -34,40 +30,42 @@ An explanation of encrypted email follows below.
 
 ### Changing Your Forename
 
-The details are outlined here: [Change forename (forename)](https://dvv.fi/en/changing-forename).
+The details are outlined here: [Change forename](https://dvv.fi/en/changing-forename).
 
 For gender affirmation, those under 15 need a guardian’s consent; those 15 and older can apply independently. Specific instructions are provided below.
 
 ### Changing Your Surname
 
-Key points are summarized here: [Change surname (surname) - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/changing-forename):
+Key points are summarized here: [Change surname - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/changing-forename):
+
 - You must have a surname.
 
-Further details are clearly stated in the document. It's mandatory to have a surname, hmmmm.
+Further details are clearly stated in the website.
 
 ## Name Service & Online Forms
 
-Using strong identity verification, navigate to the main page/form, and proceed to the relevant section to submit a new name/surname/full name.
+Using strong identity verification, navigate to the main page, and proceed to the relevant section to submit a new forename/surname/full name.
 
 Note that only the first letter of each word can be uppercase; the rest must be lowercase.
 
 Under the Name Act, you can change your name if:
+
 1. More than 5 people use the name.
 2. The applicant has a cultural connection justifying the name according to that culture's norms.
 3. The name is justified for religious reasons.
 4. Other reasons.
 
-Given the ambiguity of "other reasons," it's advisable to seek the first three methods. For instance, if your preferred name is used by >5 people, as found in [Name service - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/name-service), you can use the first method. If not, the second method may apply, such as rationalizing your name using Pinyin or another Latinized version of Chinese. I’m not well-versed in religious justifications, so I can’t offer much information there.
+Given the ambiguity of "other reasons," it is advisable to seek the first three methods. For instance, if your preferred name is used by more than 5 people, as found in [Name service - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/name-service), you can use the first method. If not, the second method may apply, if you have connections to non-Finnish cultures. I am not well-versed in religious justifications, so I cannot offer much information there.
 
-After submission, online services will require a fee of 60 or 120 euros, regardless of success.
+If it is not a name change because of a change in gender marker, the online services will require a fee of 60 or 120 euros, regardless of success.
 
 ## Printing and Mailing
 
-DVV will take 1-2 months to process your submission. You’ll receive an invoice, and upon payment, the application process will begin.
+DVV will take 1-2 months to process your submission. You will receive an invoice, and upon payment, the application process will begin.
 
 ## After the Review
 
-A letter will be sent to your address. If the name in the window of the envelope is the one you prefer, congratulations, ni, your chosen name has been reclaimed!
+A letter will be sent to your address. If the name in the window of the envelope is the one you prefer, congratulations, your chosen name has been reclaimed!
 
 ## Appeals
 
@@ -83,4 +81,4 @@ For example, `[email protected]` becomes `[email protected]`.
 [Name service - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/name-service)
 [Name service Database - DVV](https://verkkopalvelu.vrk.fi/nimipalvelu/default.asp?L=3)
 [Change forename - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/changing-forename)
-[Change surname - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/changing-forename)
+[Change surname - DVV](https://dvv.fi/en/changing-forename)